很多考生在托福写作这部分拿不了高分，可能是因为写作过程中出现了以下错误。

　　1. 句子不完整

　　句子缺少主语或谓语。

　　误：Because some necessary procedures such as transporting the factories， modifying equipment or planting more trees.

　　2. 句子缺少连词

　　两个句子之间不能只用逗号连接，要有连词。

　　误：My sister loves to dance， she is very good at it.

　　3. 句式不平行

　　句子中并列的成分应该是相同的结构。

　　误：I like to eat Japanese and eating Thai food.(eating-> eat)

　　误：Teenagers are more influenced by their peers than their parents.(than their parents-> than by their parents)

　　4. 句意重复或冗余

　　误：The low-priced car was inexpensive.(low-priced和inexpensive重复)

　　误：Personally， I believe what the newspaper prints.(personally和I believe重复)

　　当然，全国那么多考生，错误肯定也是多种多样的，小编只是总结了常见的几种，考生有则改之无则加勉。